Friday, April 16, 2010

Wanted!

After she hears someone entering the house she hurries out into her garage and tries to look for somewhere to hide. She starts searching around but her father keeps everything so un-cluttered that everywhere she goes she would be visible. So she has to think smart, she crawls underneath of the Corvette and doesn't move. Alice starts to hear someone scuffling around throught her and her father's things. All of a sudden the person enters the garage and starts looking around, but she doesn't make a move. After a few seconds of the intruder being in her garage he/she finally leaves. Alice is so releived that the person left, but she still sttays under the care for a few minutes just to make sure everything is clear...

4 comments:

  1. Wow! It was a good idea to escape into the garage, but what does she do next? Does she have any way to contact someone for help?

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  2. See, this is what drives me crazy in thriller/horror movies/books- hide under the car?!? What if they see her? Then she's done for! I would be running until I passed out.

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  3. Mrs. Bradley,

    She stays there and waits for the intruder to leave her house. Yes she has a way to contact someone for help, but for some reason she decides not to.

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  4. Ms. Shank,

    I agree with you, thats the last place i would think to go, i'd be running out the door. And i guess if they would have seen her, she's dead meat.

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